Miguel Angel is our youngest child. He was born in july 6th 2000. We are so proud of the kind of person he is. He is too humble and respectful. He is so comitted because when he wants something, he actually do everything to achieve it. Miguel likes to help people as far as he can. Sometimes Miguel is a little bit unorganized and that is something we hate. Physically he is not so tall but he is not short either. He has round brown eyes, he has hairy eyebrows and long eyelashes. He is thin no matter how much he eats. He is uncomolicated when eating and dressing too. We consider Miguel as a realoy focoused person, he has his goals really clear.
-Name: yes
-Grammar: “he actually does”, “rounded”, “uncomolicated”, “realoy”
-Not very powerful verbs.
-Examples describes the key character trait.
-Actions describe the character.
-Placement of words is not smooth.
-The character is not presented in a very interesting way.
Grade: 3.4
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